Great poem! I really loved reading it!

great poem, the best part is the ending. "the world would be nothing with me" or however it goes. 5/5

great poem. i can relate.

I'm am not sure what to say.. depression screamed through this poem. At first I thought that you showed a lot of ego in the last lines of the poem, but then I was extremely saddened because you do not have ego, you do not appreciate yourself. Your poem was a cry for help.
If I could ask one thing of you, it is that you change your avatar. Please, I am not trying to sound pathetically critical.. I think that perhaps you just need a change of mind, and it all starts with simple things. I myself am also feeling sad now, so what am I to say... somehow, I just want to help you, that is all.

//T.L.//

This poem is great very impressive some lines i really love to read and enjoyable keep it up u do a good job, i was surprise coz ur too young for me to write this kind of poet, i think u are very talented person keep up the good word, anyway before i forgot just wanna thanks for ur comment its my pleasure to hear ur comments about my poems from someone like u very talented person.. thanks and god bless...

Aww- thats so sad! excellently written.

That is so true!! i love this poem and the message!

This was an intresting poem, I liked it though, cause truth is even the happiest people on earth have once thought about killing themselves.

Im at a loss of words, but im writting this cause I want you to know how deep and expressive your poem was.
Once upon a broken night I also had a cry for help. And it was my friends who got me through.
This poem was extreamly well penned.
Hope your alright.
xox
{D.L}