NO, you pealed onions in front of my eyes!

Frankly that line made me laugh :D
your poem was good, but I wonder, if that poem was true, and that person kept causing pain, making you cry, and thinking about suicide, does he deserve any tiny piece of your heart? uh, we girls are SO emotional :D

Good luck!

Wow... I like how you wrote this poem, really. Keep writing! Please check out my poems sometime too, k?

i can relate to this.....i likes this poem...

How sad it is! I hope that this isn't true! If it is realize that this person is not worth it! You deserve better than that! Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.