Hey good poem. And I like how you rhymed but, I cannot say I am in love with the depth or the format of this poem.

the format, it's all just clumped together, I suggest spaces every 4 lines. And the depth thats up to you to fix, leave it how it is if you want to, it's not my decision.

Anyways.

Good poem keep up the good work.

Very nice, I liked it.
keep it up!
-xxx-

Much better now. Thank you for fixing it.

Thanx for the comment it seems you need to stay strong too :)...keep it up!!!

Your really really good and this poem is so true about life

Wow great poem i enjoyed reading it
keep up the good work

allana
xoxo

I love this. 5/5

I love this. 5/5