hey ppl plz comment... i want to know what ppl think about this one!!?

I really liked this poem. It was sad but yet bitter sweet in the same way.

omg thanks... i really wanted to know what ppl would think about this one

I'm sorry if that happened to you... you really did do a great job with this poem, very bittersweet and very good. ^_^x I hope you keep writing.

this is so touching i loved it i have no words to explain. i give it a 5!!!!!keep up the good work.

heart wrenching!

wow thats a well done awsome job i loved it ...... it was sad good work
peaceee

it was nice. is it a true story? if it is i'm sorry for your loss

hey hun great poem! keep up the good work and check out my stuff some time k?

xoxo luv yah

that was a greatr poem!! Great but sad ending!!