I can definetly relate. perhaps not in the same situation, but believe me many of these lines described my being perfectly
I loved the lines,
"Whatever winds through my veins will never be free
Crawling with torn clothes, shoes, skin, and no dignity

Whatever traipse over my malled body shall always know"
You portrayed the pain so well in those lines. some lines i related to,
"Whatever feeds from my dead corpse will taste the cruel mistrust"
and
"Whatever touches my cold face will be cursed with pain forever
A type of pain that can't be cured, the worst kind to endeavor"
These lines were so beautiful and have portrayed my own emotions as well. I hope you realize what a beautifully written piece this is and how meaningful is was displayed

this is so awesum!lots of emotion.
can u commen ton sum of my stuff too