Good Poem but it shold be we were not we was. Cheak out some of my poems :) bye xox

ok is this the becca as in my cousin or just some other crazy person? its good though. -britt-

becca ur cousin

good poem matt i love ya thanks 4 helpin me out

A very nce written poem...
but well i aint tying to be mean or anything... but i found a lil mistake in the word... umm...

"When we was together you made my
heart pound.when we was apart i felt
like i had been knocked down."

should be...

"When we were together you made my
heart pound.when we were apart i felt like i had been knocked down."

overall i loved the poem 5/5
keep it up!