I realy like this it does have a pretty good flow.

wow. amazing poem. nothing to critisise about. like rashelle says, it's got a very nice flow to it. go and enter the contest. keep on writing!

ciao,

*~Serena~*

I really like the way you wrote this poem. Very good and the meaning was excellent. Thank you for the comment! :-)

:( very good poem.
thanks for the comment.
Funny I really didnt try that hard on that one you read I wrote it fast but it meant alot. But if you tell me where you think that maybe I can adjust it:)
5/5