That's so sad...I hope things get better. >3jess excellent job btw.

Short and very well written it was so sad! Take Care! Brooke

it's short of short but i liked reading it, you explain the feeling in this poem very well
nice work

Such a sad poem,but I understand your feelings completely, I like the way you put feeling into the poem, although it does make me sad, lol..

I felt it was very strong and emotional you're really good

That was really sad. i understand it, i have the same situation. but, you need to place commas and periods in there to seperate your thoughts, because its kinda hard to read. 4/5

Lovely poem. Well-written. No mistakes that I could see. 5/5