Wow, short but sweet right, I really liked the way that flowed, cool, 5, keep it up

wow....short but the end is really powerful.
Every wish that didn't come true
'cuz I'm still not here with you

so powerful. 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

I LUBBB ITTTT<3 excellent moo!!!

5.0

Another well written poem where the words seemed to flow together. I think to say that I enjoyed reading this poem would be inappropriate when taking into account the topic. However the repitition worked well.

Keep writing,
Nici