i really liked that...good job! keep writting - i think ive read one of ur other poems b4 2. u seem to hav heaps of talent.

check out some of my poems if u like...
all the best ~ Holly

~ lovely write, this one too, steph. heartfelt!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

I really like this poem! It is honest and heartfelt! These lines really stood out for me:

"We held hands during good times
And let go during the bad."

Very strong thoughts~Holly