~ excellent write, this one too, but y it is incomplete?
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

"I walk along seeing people crying
Watching their loved ones, tortured or dying
Is this the " ??? u didn't finish or what?

~ anyways, keep writing. you are sure, a great writer :)

I have finished this poem it is called our world 2

Great poem, only one thing sweetie,
'An old lady living on her own
Crying because she's on her own'
You used the same word to rhyme, maybe you could do...
'An old lady living on her own
Crying because she's all alone' or something? Keep it up xxx

Thats what I thort it was lol.......I mustve written the wrong bit ive changed it on the other one