Wow, Another beautiful piece of work Mark, Keep it up, 5/5

I really really liked it i love how you wrote about how she was to others and how she was too u

Excellent! Reminds me of a Billy Joel song!

oh my god, i love this poem so much... i think its one of my favorate, if not the favorate poem on this site. i love this poem so much, brilliantly written, i really love this poem.. lol, well great job, 5/5

that is a very nice poem

Oh wow - your way with words is really quite amazing. As I read this I could imagine those as the lyrics of an all-time popular standard (and that's a compliment in case it isn't clear hehe). You know what I mean, lol. It was a poem that I should imagine touches everyone, no matter who they are. Well done.

Take care,
Karen
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Beautiful... put some music to it and it could be the perfect song. Keep up the great work

This is spectacular! I loved the detailed descriptons you used...just amazing! Great job~Holly

Hmmm seems like you've been in these situation man...it seems so real...so when i read it, its like im hearing you talking....do you write poems to say the words you feel from your heart...or the way you feel....very good poems...!
kim