This is very deep, and has quite a lot of meaning in it... some people try to put meaning across but it isn't very understandable, but this u can understand quite clearly and as a result it is an awesome poem
*rates 5*

I love the use of repition in poem - and this is no exception
One thing
Brake at the end should be break
=]

Yeah i clearly see the meaning and emotion coming from this. great poem, and ive felt the same way. just today actually haha

This was the best of your poems I read so far :)