Harsh topic, if it's about you then you have my sympathies.

Em, i terms of poetic advice, i thought the flow of the words seemed a little curt in places, like the second line of the second stanza seemed to end a few syllables too early.

Do you read your poems out to see how they sound?....i always do...just to get an idea how somone else reading might hear them.

I thought u did a great job. Keep writing!

Hey thanks for the comments. it means alot to me to hear something like that from an accomplished poet such as yourself. This is a really great poem. I'm goin to read some other ones but i added u to my favs. list. See Ya!