Comments : The soul inside

  • hmm confusing but intresting at the same time
    i gave it a 5
    well done xoxox
    nice choice of words by the way

  • 16 years ago

    by anastasia

    5/5 great! i really do love this one

  • 14 years ago

    by MandiMae

    Its well written butI don't relate to this one, I don't havemuch to say about this one sorry

  • 14 years ago

    by Woe

    Wow. i freaking LOVE this! its really really good. 5/5. you say you dont write about personal experience so i thought maybe it would sound kinda forced ya know but, not at all! this is amazing. keep it up <3

  • 14 years ago

    by Debbie

    I liked the seeming idea of an inner self willingly hiding within the character. It's slightly different from the previous works I had come across in the past with the same theme employed. But I was a bit confused with the conclusion: it seemed to me to be portraying that the character's inner self is of another person's nature rather than her own.

    An interesting read, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The end sort of caught me off guard, it's rather confusing honestly. As I was reading I thought the inner soul/ other soul, was the girl's. Like annother part of her she hadn't noticed before or something and then you made it seem as if there's another person in the entirely lol. Definitely different. The poem overall is well written and the concept, although strange, is unique. 5/5

    macella

  • 14 years ago

    by santino

    Nice poem i like the words and the story