Wow. i freaking LOVE this! its really really good. 5/5. you say you dont write about personal experience so i thought maybe it would sound kinda forced ya know but, not at all! this is amazing. keep it up <3
I liked the seeming idea of an inner self willingly hiding within the character. It's slightly different from the previous works I had come across in the past with the same theme employed. But I was a bit confused with the conclusion: it seemed to me to be portraying that the character's inner self is of another person's nature rather than her own.
An interesting read, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing.
The end sort of caught me off guard, it's rather confusing honestly. As I was reading I thought the inner soul/ other soul, was the girl's. Like annother part of her she hadn't noticed before or something and then you made it seem as if there's another person in the entirely lol. Definitely different. The poem overall is well written and the concept, although strange, is unique. 5/5