It was a lot better than u think! I thought it was a job well done!

i really like it. i wonderful. i cant write half as good as you.

it is well done ... i believe you can work on this and make a couple of senetences better but other than that it shows a very very good meaning of fear .... It holds me back
Taking me off the track
as the tears flow
The fears grow.
best line love it ... keep it up i look forward to more wonderful poems from ya

wow, very good, 5/5