wow wow wow i loved it i loved it i dont know wat too sayy hun it was aswsome ur a great writter and i love ur peoms wow keep it upp :D always love yaa >:D< hugs bugs loll
peaceee

~ good poem, heather. very nice write friend
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

"But Forever A Footprint In My Heart
That Walks Along The Surface Everyday,
Forever The Keepsakes Of The Love
I'll Never Ever Throw Away."

This stanza is gold! I truly love it! Don't get me wrong the entire poem is beautiful with tremors of sadness! But that one stanza is pure brilliance! Take care! Love & Peace~Holly

Loved it mucho! lol Keep writing!

Chris

Hey this is a stunning poem, brilliantly set out

Great poem, for some reason it said i already voted for this poem and i know for a fact i didnt. I give a 5 all the way! Have a great day is all i say lol

Heather, Another beautiful poem. loved each and every line. hugs, lol, *Ann*

Wow!!! girl a great write, I must say
your talent really pours out specially
on the 9th stanza. Beautifully written
poem. 5/5 ( :

i think that your a wonderful poet heather and i think that you should let yourself express that more. in poems like these. Inside your truely a nice person...your the opposite of me.

Trust me, if you need a Savior, look no futher hehe :). You know i am kidding, but good job.

True love: can bring total happiness and joy, and it can also bring all the pain in the world. That's what love does to you, don't know why, wish I did though. Anyways, another great poem Heather. It's a five.

You have created another astonishing and brilliant poem. I loved it.

Very heartfelt! Good work! I hope you will read mine!

Outstanding, beautiful and lovely. Great poem and i think it deserve gold 5****
Keep writing Hun!