Awesome, awesome job! well written..I like it. Keep writing
-J-

please say it ...just say it sweetie !! i just wish i cud do that but even i am too scared .....but you go ahead before it is too late

wow, wonderfull poem!! really reminds me of my situation with my best friend.... i havent known her long... a couple years... but if she wasnt engaged to my best friend....... <cough cough> anywho.. shes better off with him..

anyways i loved it!

5/5 (and deserved)

~chris

You should tell him the way you feel, if your friendship is true then it will be strong enough to stay true after your feelings are revealed...plus you never know how he really feels unless one of you lays your heart on the line...he just might feel exactly the same :o)
Good luck!

I like this poem because I too had a crush on my best guy friend but I was too scared too say anything. The poem is very good. Keep up the good work.

I really know how you feel - exactly! Great poem.

Take care,
Karen
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baby I love you is 4 words...lol great poem tho, 5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

i love it im in the same situation, hes afraid to say it and so am i, but much props to you , plz rate mine too!!!!!1

Wonderful poem! I kinda know how you feel.. I really like this guy too, but he's almost 5 years older than me and it just hurts me a lot to like him like I do. You really worded well! If you have time, please check out some of my poems, it would be really appreciated. Thanks, and amazing job! (",)

~Krissy

you took the words right out of my mouth. except. i did not realize i was in love with him. He showed me a path and i decided to take it. Not knowing it would lead to us going out. however even though i do say "baby, i love you" i still do with to here it from his mouth someday soon. that is all i ever crave anymore to here from his lips.

Girl i kno tha feelin, man do I. But one things I have learned is do not underestimate guys sumtimez. Last year i fell for a friend and it turned out he felt the same!!!!! I know it has 2 feel good to get your feelins out there though!

You should tell him! You never know he might just be feeling the same way. You're a very talented poet. I enjoy your work. I look forword to reading more! ~Brooke~

Wow! this was an awesome poem!!its exactly about how i feel with one of my guy friends...:( atleast were really close! great poem 5/5!!
-Mira

Beautiful poem =] 5/5

That's how i felt about someone that i thought was special but then i found that he wasn't. I'm not saying that might happen to you though! Just gather up all your courage and tell him how you feel. And whatever happens .................happens.

I really like this one good job..

Dang.
I could SO relate! =]

5/5

I've been looking EVERYWHERE for a poem like this !
I absolutely LOVE it - it describes everything i feel as well.
you're a really talented writer. <3
keep up the awesome work [: