This poem is very good. I liked how it went. It has a lot of feelings in it. Great job hun!

xoxo
Kayla

Hey beautiful poem

very well written.. i hope you don't mind me making a slight criticism.. a HE wasn't mentioned at all until the end, it seemed like it was 2 seperate poems made into one.
Other than that i really enjoyed it, good job

Very well done, I might make a few minor changes to some of the verses, but it's really not my place to say. The content was great, and the scheme was very well pulled off.

Wow it sounded like you were describing me...... I thought it was beautiful just like the title:) i really liked it and i thought it was one of your best, defiantly more then a 5*

I don't know quite what I was thinking when I commented earlier....that came across as very turse and it wasn't meant to be, I apologize. I enjoyed this piece very much, your thoughts and content are always very solid. Truly well done.

Nice job dis poem is great ~*~