I wouldn't ever think of making fun of your poem it was reall very good. Im really sorry about your house. I hope all is going well. Thanks for your comment. It means alot.
-Jordan

holy crap. your style is awseom. i think you did an amazing job here. in so few words you are able to come across such an awsome expereince. makes me feel like i was there. keep up this awsome work. Much Luv

oh wow! i guess your somewhere by the south.. yeah there was alot of devastation in Florida and Louisana and south texas

I agree with them this poem is really good... i could never think of this... i really think that this poems say alot even though its short that must have been a horrable experiance... but this poem is freakin awsome