i figured i'd try something different

i dont kno bout u guys but i reallly like mthis poem of mine :)

ohhhhhh, gurl too tru. u no wat ur talkin bout aii
nyc 1=)

i love this poem its so ture.. i had a boyfriend named josh and thats what he id to me... everything that u said. how u put that all in words i cant believe it!!!!

The rhyme was good...
the flow was good...
the idea was good...
and the whole poem was amazing,,,
keep it up!