amazing poem!!!
i can really relate to that, my best friend dumped me for this new girl, she lived lot closer to her.
she started picking her as a partner instead of me and said sm really cruel stuff!

after that, the connection was just...broken, it was really hard watching someone else take your place.

i know how it feels and im there 4 u if ya eva wanna talk
5/5, great poem!!!

your poem is very good aswell.
it's no problem if the ending of mine was kinda fun, but that was not the intension. read the post angry in the saddness and depresion forum, and you will understabd the ending.

i loved it ! keep writing!

wow..amazing job! really good 5..
-J-

Hey Gurdy, I just wanted to say thanks for leaving a comment for my poem and I'm glad you liked it. Anyways, I decided to check out a few of your work too and I just want to tell you that it is amazing, I love how you described everything and I can definatly relate. Keep up the awsome work. =)

Hey Gurdy, I just wanted to say thanks for leaving a comment for my poem and I'm glad you liked it. Anyways, I decided to check out a few of your work too and I just want to tell you that it is amazing, I love how you described everything and I can definatly relate. Keep up the awsome work. =)

Very Nice poem. Beautiful. By the way, thanks a lot for your comment on my poem(s).

Much Love, Amit. (5/5)