thx for commitinh on my poem! i thinkif u thought a little harder and it doesnt have to rhyme, you might come up with a story inside a poem, kinda like i did with my friendship poem about my best friend! short but says everything and not everyone writes good poems off the bat, but if you just wait one good one or more will come! i know im not that good but as long as you believe in yourself your poems are good! and if they mean something to you! that helps alot! write something about you or someone special!

thanx :D

thanx Holly. :D

Hey, this is really good, try and expand on it some more and it would be amazing, youve got talent! I gave it a 5, keep writing and stay strong

Much love
xoxo

:) thanks broken that were sweet.
i never thought that someone would say that my poem was good. well see u in the chatrooms. hey mabe we can play tag sometime.*hugs*

much love
becca

my friend was taking diet pills and i promised i wouldnt tell, and i was off my meds and havig a panic attack and i told the school coulselor and i felt really bed cause i have never broken a promise,

but now that i think about it id rather tell then find out that my best friend is dead and then regreting that i didnt do anything

thanx for comenting

much love,
becca

Does n e one else have n e thoughts on my poem? I like to see what ppl think about the things that i write....
plz comment.

much love,
becca