Comments : My Truth *Resubmitted*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    One small thing...."and thats who she can only be," Something like "And that's all that she can be" seems to fit better, but that's just me. Very expressive, well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow another amazing poem, flowed very well and i absolutely loved it, like your others!5*