The trill of desperation, envy and faith...a child once favored and now seemingly replaced, no the truth of what we read and was the angel’s roles only changed but never lessened.
The passion throughout this piece is extremely vivid, and the choice of words for the Angel's descriptions were spectacularly expressive
Wonderfully dismal.

wonderful poem

check out my poems when you get a chance. it means a lot to me.
i'll return the favour!
xoxoxox
nida

. . . Speachless. I totaly understood it, and i loved it. Thanks for the great read. and Great job on the beauitful write.

-courtney-

very good, very talentful..i like this, written from your heart

Wow....this is one of the best religious poems I've ever read! It's riveting... All I can say is Wow~Holly

Nicely written, a very nice meaning in it