Comments : When fears caught me

  • 14 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice and expressive
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    thanks amit. but i dont believe in love now

  • 12 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very beautifully done

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful! The beauty in the world that you have descibed comes from the heart. Now you have not only saved your praises, but shared them with the world. Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Gizmo

    When i go outside, when i see the bright sun,i want to praise God and save words in my copy but i am afraid before 'I'M' saveD i die

    THE moon and stars shine so bright and the moonlight makeS me realize to praise you God as i praise in words, i am afraid before I'M save on paper i may die

    When i see all the beauty of nature,
    i want to save in my paper to my pen as i write on the paper i am afraid before I describe, i die

    when i see long buildings, with many windows, i walk slowly and when i see tall trees

    where birds look so little on the sky i want to explain and praise you and during writing these all things, on my paper i am afraid i MAY die

    as i walk and go far from the city in the green fields wheRE THE cool breezE touches my body, i feel so glad

    i want to save THESE feelings in my copy but when fear caTCHES me i am afraid before I AM saveD i may die

    you made this world very beautiful. Mountains rivers, made me realize that i write something in your praise
    but again i am afraid before praise i MAY die

    there is so much beauty and you made her so much beautiful,
    my love when i see her eyes i see A different world which belongs to my heart, i want to praise my love but i am afraid before this i MAY die

    i look at her, i am afraid before I hold her in my arms before I find her i may die and thus i will BE unable to get the passion of love and its experience.

    THIS IS AN UNUALS POEM..I AM NOT RELIGIOUS.BUT EVERYONE TO THERE OWN. I HOPE THESE CHANGES ARE HELPING YOU.

  • 7 years ago

    by Jessica

    Beautifully Pieced Together.. Loved It (:
    -Jessi