When i go outside, when i see the bright sun,i want to praise God and save words in my copy but i am afraid before 'I'M' saveD i die
THE moon and stars shine so bright and the moonlight makeS me realize to praise you God as i praise in words, i am afraid before I'M save on paper i may die
When i see all the beauty of nature,
i want to save in my paper to my pen as i write on the paper i am afraid before I describe, i die
when i see long buildings, with many windows, i walk slowly and when i see tall trees
where birds look so little on the sky i want to explain and praise you and during writing these all things, on my paper i am afraid i MAY die
as i walk and go far from the city in the green fields wheRE THE cool breezE touches my body, i feel so glad
i want to save THESE feelings in my copy but when fear caTCHES me i am afraid before I AM saveD i may die
you made this world very beautiful. Mountains rivers, made me realize that i write something in your praise
but again i am afraid before praise i MAY die
there is so much beauty and you made her so much beautiful,
my love when i see her eyes i see A different world which belongs to my heart, i want to praise my love but i am afraid before this i MAY die
i look at her, i am afraid before I hold her in my arms before I find her i may die and thus i will BE unable to get the passion of love and its experience.
THIS IS AN UNUALS POEM..I AM NOT RELIGIOUS.BUT EVERYONE TO THERE OWN. I HOPE THESE CHANGES ARE HELPING YOU.