I dont think its bad at all! i really like it! awesome job!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

This is excelent! VERY GOOD. KEEp it up!.
Paula <-- keep on writing
It would be great if you could vote or comment on any of my poems

dude whatchu talkin about i LOVED that poem. awesome job

You havent written any new poetry recently so i went to read one of your old ones. I can't see how you can't like that. I am a pussy when it comes to graphic images of peoples scars on the rists and also people with terrible anorexia. This poem put images in my head and i couldnt really handle it, thats what made it good. I powerfull poem puts images in your head. I was exellent!

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