This piece was very inspiring to the fatithful. Your words were very respectful and lovely throughout.
Beautifully done.

Such a sweet title. As a believer I sensed a hunger for understanding and faith. You don't seen many religous poem so this was pleasing to read. It was so marvellously penned it sounded like a prayer....Good stuff...

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I liked it all but the last line dosnt seem to fit the rest as i thought it should, but thats just me, either way.. good work!