when i read your poem i began to cry. its really good. i really liked it. my boyfriend left to the army not so long ago. so i knoe the pain it is to let some 1 go. check out my poems and let me knoe wat u think
keep up the good work

thank you so much! sorry i made you cry, taht was not my intentions...lol but thanxs for the comment! God Bless

thankxs for the comment, it ment alot. i'll be praying for your fiance! take care, God bless

i'm sorry for your loss, i know its hard for you, but keep on smiling! thankxs for your comment, it means alot to me. I worked really hard on this one (even though it may not show lol) i really do appriciate it. take care and God Bless

thanxs for the comment, and the simpathy...theres just one thing you should know i didn't loose anyone to the war in iraq or in the army or anything i jsut wrote what came to mind. thank you anyways! take care and god bless

Gosh ithink i have tears in my eyes .. the poem is such a painful heartwarming poem.. you feel so much hurt then you see all the happiness he had with her. death is a hard thing to interpret until you have something that reminds you of the person and suddenly it hits you all at once. an amazing write :]
take care, sarah

I am sorry ifn this happend to you. Tho I do not know much bout love, I do about pain. I just turned 15, and a couple of years go I, stupidly, let a guy walk away. the only one I mliked that liked me back. I loved your poem, its beutiful.

Wow, ur poem wos beautiful, it was so sad yet so full of love, a real tragic love story. I had to comment after reading it simply to say what an amazing poem it was, full of empathy, compassion and love.
Beth xxx

This is so sad... It scares me to death because my boyfriend is in Iraq right now... He is do home in may... I can't wait I miss him so much...

Oh my God that poem is very good thats rated as my fav poem

Good poem 5/5 love crazy xoxox

This is really beautiful. 5/5

wonderful words, and great emotion.

all i can say is wow.