Comments : Not as common as a grain of sand

  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    that was a good poem i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    that was a good poem i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, that's an awsome poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    Lol sounds liek it could be a song, great job on that part. One of a land in a far away place, filled love peace
    and grace was my fav part. once in a while it didnt rhyme right, or so it seemd. but im being too hard on you becuz it was really good! keep it up!