Comments : Time clock (broken friend)

  • 19 years ago

    by Hoover

    Good Poem,
    I really liked this part:
    "Never accepted,
    Kept away from you friends,
    To hurt for so long,
    With your pain caged within."
    but in that little part, where it says "you", shouldn't it say "your"?
    just wondering, keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Pyrovengance

    lol yeah you're right it should be your instead of you. Thanks for the comment.