awesome job sweetie, great write!!!! keep it up! i luv your stuff -lol- well 5/5!
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Wonderful write though very definite and sad. I like the way you specified her, because a picture build up in my mind, so your metaphors were brilliantly described !
5/5 Espacially the last two stanzas were my fave ones. These two lines "Strength lasts a second
Pain lasts a life" were very inspiring !

Keep it up, you've much talent :-)
Bye, Sabine

I would be so glad if you could comment and vote on some work of mine, too. Thank you a lot.

You should make a book! Wow your poems are great i love how you get the re-using of a verse to work, i try and try but it wont work for me