great poem!! very loving....
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

wow great poem.
keep up the great work!!!
thanx 4 ur comments:)

omg i love it!

Really great poem, its quite nice! The flow wasnt as perfect as I thought it would be, but then again it seemed to have elements of both non-rhyming (at certain parts) and rhyming, so I thought it was good :)