Comments : My fantasy

  • 16 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    hmm....I liked it. It was short but its easy to get the point, and also you used good wording. Even though it is short, i think it's easier to read it when it's short cuz then you don't get bored reading it. keep on writing,
    SatuzKa

  • 16 years ago

    by Amilo

    I thought it was decent... I liked the last line, quite emotional and articulate, but the overall poem could use a bit more orginality.

    Question ... "Your kisses make me tremor".. how would you know, if "you are only, my fantasy"? ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer

    Am glad that you are back and writing again always amazing as usual thats why your on my favorites keep up the great work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    It was short but to the point u can always add to it later if u decide. Very well written I liked it! If u would check out some of mine and comment I always could use advice. Thanx!

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Short and to the point, not a bad thing. Take care I am glad to see you writing more. Take care...

  • 16 years ago

    by chloe

    i dont think the lengh matters, as most of my poems are short, as long as it flows well and puts a good message across then a short poem is as good as a long one! i think its great! very well written... nice 1 x