Good poem life is one big mystery, keep it up!

take care

I LOVE this.
first of all I saw alot of myself in it, and wanted to let you know you did a fantastic job of creating an understanding to the reader.
Also, your text choice was flawless and powerfully used. The thoughts you have crossed then interpredted into this piece were intensified by this vocabulary that extends symbols and creates impact upon the reader.
I truly admired your symbols and how you worded them to create a display of poetic skill and thought. I especially admired the lines,
"It’s a mystery
Why a teenage cries to have all perfect
When this life exists in none but dreams
Save a shattered life- live and not expect."
Wonderful job, beautiful

This was beautifully rendered, words flawlessly chosen and delivered for impact. Straightforward yet poignant. Wonderful!

aww ! great great job!!
keep it up hun!! <3333
check mine out sometime..:D

xoxo
Aubs