Wow! awesome job! definitely a 5..keep writing!
-J-

Hey, I liked this poem, cewl. When you get the chance, please check out my poem “Bad Habit” Please rate/comment it. I would appreciate it. Also check out “Love” if you can. Thanx

Another great poem u write with true feeling! I found one thing though on the second paragraph 3rd line you forgot a t on the to sorry I just noticed it and thought I would let u know. Keep writing!

wonderful i can't say any thign else!!!
just wonderful. 5/5