Sorry guys... this is in the wrong category... i spent like 1/2 and hour trying to get it to put it where it was supposed to be and it kept counting errors on words that weren't wrong and it tried to add words and stuff so i just said 4get it and put it under slang

Yeah that is a kool poem! U r a good writer too and maybe when you get to my age you'll be selling ur poems and be famous! I'll add u to my favourite then i can check them all out when you write some more :)