Really nice poem! Great job! (",)

~Krissy

Aaawww that's horrible.... I mean well written but sad. That sucks! Great poem though. (as always) :)~

:*( Very sad..well written though! As always..Keep it up Heather! :o) Excellent write!
~Touching Evil
--Shannon--

Heather, Absolutely beautiful with words so true. This one touched me more than you know. Great job and beautifully written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

~ beautiful and touching, excellent poem heather
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Written with such honesty, very sincere! Flawless flow and beautiful description! Awesome, Awesome~Holly

i LOVE it!! you go girl! PLP

~lil slam~

as always Heather it was a wondeful poem. It was simply amazin and it seemed to have something that all others didn't a bad and a good side to it. I really liked that part of it sweety, keep your chin up, i know that you will find someone to love.

With Loving Regards,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior

Heather, this is awesome! It is definately one of your best!

Great poem. Wonderful

Very very nice:P just like all the others ur an amazing poet keep it up ::Hugs:: -Rachel

HUNBUN830 is back!! :)

AWWWW, this is soooo sad. It's a great poem but still so sad.

P.S. Are you sure you didn't know I was like THAT? LoL, I've always said "my girl" or "Auliya", her name, and you didn't know to see if my profile said whether I was a girl or not?

lol..but yeah, reallyy good poem here.

and I know 14 is too young to get married silly, it's not even legal for the sake of age and gender. But have you ever wanted to be that close, that committed to the one you love and that person to you? Can't help the feeling of wanting to. sry...I talk too much. lol.
-peace.

beautiful but made me a bit sad. I really liked it though, cuz of the honest way it says things. 5/5, very good poem.
SatuzKa

Arrrr that is so good! :)