Oh my I love this poem... you are really good...your poem gave me butterflys great work...
Xox Sherrie

I love this poem. Excellent. 5/5

Again - beautiful imagery - this poem really works, can't wait to read the others :)

Peace. [Sole]

David, thank you for the comment on my poem.

This was beautifully written, excellent, and astonishing Haha I sound like the magazine quotes on the back of books. Well, I love it and you've deffinitly got my 5/5.

Chelsey

Oh, and sorry to get off the topic, but I see you live in Pennsylvania. Where, may I ask?

Wow!..David this one is beautiful...very well written and the choce of words was superb and the poem flowed well too

I give it a 5/5=)

xxPoojaxx

Mmm, very good. Well written, flowed well, wording was awesome.
You have a talent.
keep it up
xxxxx