Exellent very well put just hope u mean it if it's a true story it's not worth it! Keep writing!

its a really good poem so i have to nitpick.
i see u were rhyming lines 2 and 4 in each stanza but in one of the knees and me doesnt rhyme but other than that it was truly beautiful.keep it up.5/5

Another great poem! Girl , i can really relate! I went through the same and felt the same but it wound up him cheatin on me and thats how it ended. But i love your writing! Keep it up!

I like the way you recognize the agony of a relationship, and realize at the same time that your trapped in love. 5/5 all the way girl!