This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem.

This needs some serious revision on it the words seem to stumble over each other making it very hard to read. Your ideas are going faster then your pen slow down this is not a 50 yard dash. Keep trying...