A girl is loved
who once was hated
the love was lost
a memory faded

this kinda confused me.. but the more i read it the more i understood.. it's just that the transition from the girl hated then loved then hated seems quick, cuz of the form constraints, and so is hard to grasp to me.. if it is indeed the girl's love who is lost.. maybe use "her love" instead of "the love".. thats a bit more clear... i liked the whole idea of this.. good flow and good content that stayed on the same set of idea the whole way thru.. goodjob.. pZ out =O)