Awesome, especially the last stanza, I felt it wrapped up the poem nicely. As always, wonderful poem. Take care...

The two-line repititiion of the lfirst phrases added a nice effect to the poem, and I think the meaning in general was put in a honest, almost stubborn tone. It seems to question faith in general, but I don't understand how it'd fit as a.. love poem..

Rhyme with bedlam, and your approach appeals with grace and romance. You're a borderline Messiah Miles ;)

I know this may seem like an oddity of a love poem, but in many respects, while a stubborn questioning of what is considered faith, it's also an invitation to a special soul to walk a certain walk, live a certain life.

And in that, it's definitely a love poem. ;)

And by the way, thank you gracious and beauteous ladies. You honor me greatly. Not sure about the Messiah part, borderline or otherwise. Though I wouldn't have scoffed as have others at Mary Magdalene. ;)

Oh! Sorry, Jason. Thank you gracious and beauteous ladies, and noble, handsome gentleman. :)

Beautifully written, deep on all levels. I can see how it could be considered a love poem....great write!
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