i love it my boyfriend of two years broke my heart thursday and you took the words out of my mouth.

wow really enjoyed this...altho on first few lines think u should check ur spelling e.g.

held my breath are(as?) you said goodbye
And i heard the dial tone
My eyes stung burning hot as i whispered your name
Forgetting to hand (hang?) up the phone

just a suggestion but beatifully written!
take care
xxxLoUxxx