Whoever reads this, should know that this poem can be found by another "poet" on this site, named Hailie, who has been stealing at least three of my poems: The lady of the night, fate of a dreamer, and The crossroads (which i originally named Dead End). i can prove that these are my poems. The sad thing is that "Fate of a dreamer, for instance has been given 87 all-positive comments, but They all believe that she has written it. I am so pissed of right now. You can find my poems on "teenpoetry.studentcenter.org" if you search for Enslavement_of_beauty", which is my username there. Thank you. Help me defeat such thiefs as hailie

whoa!
your good pal,
the story grasp me.
i think everyone of us are wanderer.
choices and chances always walk together.

great message here in this poem... life goes on... great write... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

wow totally loved this. its very deep. the first few lines made me wanna read it all. great work xxxxx

wow wow great poem... thanks for your comment.. really meant a lot! 5/5 for this one =) take care

great poem.. awsome work =) 5/5!

wonderful poem. keep it up. 5/5
you have the talent

thanks for commenting/voting on my poems. means a lot to me.
luv
nida

On a whole I like your work its descriptive and has good flow. On the down side. I think you get your message lost too easily in the words you use. Making your work too not and just weighed down with so much that it seems like the reader has to force themselves to read the rest. Too much lull time between action I think Ann Rice does alot of this. Well that is my opinion take it or leave it I hoped I helped...

pretty good. really good actually. keep up the great work and always smile
xxx
paulette

Very good poem!!! 5/5! wow!

I loved this one too....your very talented, i love the way you use the words(If that makes sense,lol) It flows well and the message is beautiful,and true....I love how you use questions, it really interests the reader(me!lol) and makes them want to read more and also i love how it starts "positively" but there's like an HoWeVeR!!! Very unique 5*

wow, this one is really great. I like
the way you wrote this one. really
good job. take care, marjan