Excellent, and i mean EXCELLENT, poem. I really like it. keep up the good work..<5

--tasha

thats so sad yet, so true to how i feel myself. LOVED IT

An angel is a symbol used often in poetry; a fallen angel also indicates a lot of sadness and sorrow, lack of self-inspiration.
To be honest- it was a flowing poem... but lacked a bit of uniqueness.
Though at 13, you have years and years to develope skills. At your age, I was writing things like "I like to wear a hat, and I like my cat".
Keep writing, and venture out of the box!

Abbi, this is the first of your poems that i've read, and you are going on my favorites because of it! Absolutely amazing!

you're such a talented writer... i hope to become as good as you... you put so much emotion and realization into words... i'm really touched... keep up the good writing

Wow, this is awesome... great job!

This is one of my fav...this is so nice...i love it...keep up the great work.

Wow, again so beautiful.... keep up the writing your amazing.... take care...
polly

Very nice poem!
Good rhymes and flow.
I especially like the ending!
Good write!
5/5