Looks a lot better from my perspective. How does it make you feel now? Are you more satisfied with it?

wow... i like it... i so totally know how you feel... things went from totally wonderful to a living h*ll overnight... but it took like 4 months and now it's better again... i can only wish the same happens for you...

Awesome job! I wish you all the best. Keep writing!
-J-

Hi Amanda

This poem was a pleasure to read hun :o) I coud relate to it on several levels. A high quality, unique emotional piece well done

Thanks for your comments to Amanda feel free to email me anytime :o)

Eirisa

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)