Great poem..keep it up!
-J-

Holy Moly that's sad!!! But it shows that you put your heart into it and that is enough to make it great!! I enjoyed reading this....5/5

wow this is sad

Another great poem but again it's so sad! U can really tell how u write with true emotion! Take Care! 5/5

Great poem. Such sadness. You really can put your emtions across really well. I really liked this verse:

"I can still see your face now
So reassuring, so much care
And even though your gone
Your still always there"

You must really like this person. I understand that. Keep up the good work. : ( if u ever need to talk just email me.
~@L€X~

Very good poem, it reminds me of my best friend Grace. Very beautiful. The last lines were perfect and the flow was good. Keep writing, i really liked this poem.
Satuxxa

Wow you made me cry... which never happens too often, i felt as if i were you living that nightmare and the ending was so perfect there's not even words to describe it!

If that really happened I'm terribly sorry and i hope you staying strong...Don't blame yourself because there was nothing more you could do except be there for her which from this poem i know you were! Be strong and God bless
Anyways sorry for rambling on 5*