Excellent read.
What can I praise, I feel as if I'm repeating myself?
Imgery-was flawless and an imagined world of fantasy and color that proclaimed throughout every line, dedicated to the story's emotion and capacity
symbolism-greatly used, tied into the imageries to create astounding art and fit sceneries for the poem and defined meanings behind every one
I love the main idea, it's unique, creative, and has a hidden meaning that can relate to the everyday life which we live in. My favorite stance was,
"Who are we but companions of a lost time…best as three immersed by and by, second to none in our longevity. Lust and Blood and Darkness, is that not the lore of your fear? Every capture we’ve come, and every dream has done we’re from. A well of severance from a bitter mass opinion, this fiction of reality has masked you. I admit it makes me tilt my head, and suddenly I’ve need to confess the chaos I bed."
Well done Elizabeth

Nicely sensual, though for all that probably my favorite image is "glacier of secrecy".

But I definitely do love "resting her hand where she would kiss."