Really nice flow and rhyme to it.
You are really good, keep it up..
5/5 from me~
Check some of my poems out if you get a chance.
XoxoX
*Robin*

awesome hun...just so wonderous...you'r eso amazing...im glad you're out of nowhere :) <33 love you xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

5/5 i lovedit.

that was amazing hun, im glad you are out of nowhere, i really liked how you ended it on a happy note, a lot of writers can't tie the dark and then happiness together without it being all over the place, you are really a great writer. keep up the good work
5/5
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much love,
cate